Hi Calay, I like it how you have put a variety of different colours. Maybe next time you could put the event or what they were doing when they came first. I think your medal is very detailed and colourful. From Millie.B
Hi Calay, I like the colours that you chose it reminded me of the time that i got a medal in touch prise giving. I think that you could of put a black outline. But any way its a really good drawing.
hi Calay i i like you detail in the medal and the colour combination and like that you have put couch brodys name on it good drawing but next time put more detail from Chelsey
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Great medal Calay I really liked how you told people in the text that he won first place for his running
ReplyDeleteHi Calay,
ReplyDeleteI like it how you have put a variety of different colours.
Maybe next time you could put the event or what they were doing when they came first. I think your medal is very detailed and colourful.
From Millie.B
Hi Calay,
ReplyDeleteI like the colours that you chose it reminded me of the time that i got a medal in touch prise giving. I think that you could of put a black outline. But any way its a really good drawing.
hi Calay
ReplyDeletei i like you detail in the medal and the colour combination
and like that you have put couch brodys name on it
good drawing but next time put more detail
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